Friday, May 9, 2014

AND THEN WHAT?

The story is going to be about a post- apocalyptic wasteland, where everyone has to trade resources to survive each day. The main protagonist's name is Esther and she is fifteen years old. In the wasteland, no one can live for more than nineteen years. She has a friend , Skar, who is a variant. Variants are outcasts and hermaphroditic, they are boys and girls, they don't live in the city of Prin and wear different clothing. 

9 comments:

  1. So far, it looks like you all are working well together. I am a little concerned with the background and how it interacts with your font choices. Also, make sure that you post "The First 48" and "Who's Who" by tomorrow! Good job!

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  2. Thanks Ms. Owens, we got this (George Lopez voice)!

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  3. Erica (Wasteland): Nice background, blog seems well organized. You might want to change the font color as it is somewhat difficult to read.

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  4. Haleigh(wasteland): I like your background, but you need to change the font size and color so that it will be a little easier to read.

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  5. Samuel (Wasteland): The blog looks really good so far! would increase the font size and change the color. The background fits in really well with the book.

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  6. Janajhia (Wasteland): This looks put together well. Just change the font to a brighter color maybe & increase the size. Great job!

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  7. Austin(legend): I like how you done the police report for the first 48. I can only say is make the font a little nit bigger so it's easier to read

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  8. Jalen (matched): I liked all of your information, but i feel like your background doesn't really flow with the blog.

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  9. Previous post: "May 15, 2014 at 9:31 AM

    So far, it looks like you all are working well together. I am a little concerned with the background and how it interacts with your font choices. Also, make sure that you post "The First 48" and "Who's Who" by tomorrow! Good job!"

    I gave you this advice at the beginning of the project in mid-May, and you did not take my advice or anyone else who told you the same things. Overall, the content is there, but your grammar has some need for editing.

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